ひらがな カタカナ
せんりゅうお アジアジン
れんしゅすればは たくさんいます
せんしゅです せかいには
がくせいも ベットがすき
せんせいになる クラスがきらい
おなじひと がくせいは
たべものと いろりろな
のみものがすき スポーツがある
にんげんは アメリカに
Katakana words were mainly used as nouns. Although some of the words like Bed and Class can be substituted with words in Hiragana, the Katakana, or English words, give the effect that a foreigner wrote the Senryu. It is almost like a fusion of two cultures as well as that of languages. The modern use of these words give a fresh impression in the traditional Senryu format.
Nice! This had emotion, delivered a message, it was creative and nicely presented. In terms of the criteria given I'd say this fits all of them. 10
ReplyDeleteこれせんりゅはとてもいいですね。
はいくはいいです。たびものとのみものがすきです!Good use of Katakana.
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